Mystery Letter

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     91 Banana Road                                                                                                                                         Fruit Valley                                                                                                                                                  0000

Dear mum and dad,
                                                    
I hear the fist cars driving by. There are white walls everywhere. With a little bit of pen lines. I smell candy perfume.I taste fresh air.I fell the ice cold floor. In the night time there are cats mewing. It is very annoying. Even in the day time there are cats mewing. I can taste the cold milk still in my moth. I see meowing cats. I wish I had a dog. When aver I am working I fell flustered because all I hear is meow meow ! I am very frustrated. I see some drawings on the wall. The drawings are not on the wall they are drawn on paper and then glued on the wall. I see the ginormous TV.

From,
Sehaj

                                                 

                                                     

Reflection: We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses. I enjoyed writing about the place.  Something I found tricky was thinking of ideas for sight. Next I well try to proofread my work carefully.